Comment by iskander Mellakh on December 22, 2009 at 4:51am

this looks really nice, the hologram pop looks cool :)

Comment by Michael Cawood - Director on December 22, 2009 at 8:46am

Can you have a longer gap between the two Holograms coming up? So that the audience gets a chance to see the first one and it's numbers changing, before the second one comes up.

Then can we have a bigger anticipation of the Peeps pulling back before rushing towards each other?

There needs to be an obvious moment when the beam strikes them (tags them) before their hologram pops up.

Try to make the two Peeps and their holograms different, and obviously male and female (there's colour attributes and shape options). You can vary the random values on the hologram as well to change the pattern of the appearance.

This is a tricky shot to time out... don't worry if you have to add a little screen time to make it work. The Peeps are more important than Cupid though, so the more time you take the less we are likely to be able to show of Cupid.

Otherwise though, a really nice start.

Comment by Michael Cawood - Director on December 22, 2009 at 8:47am

Do you have a YouTube account you could post these to as you go along?

Comment by AnnMarie Cernoch on December 22, 2009 at 11:05am

very cute, Mohammad!

Comment by Mohammad Sadeh on December 22, 2009 at 6:14pm

Thanks guys very much, Ok I see I will do the adjustments and will post on YouTube next time.

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